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The Yuan is born from the conviction that AI must be harnessed to uplift humanity, not oppress it.
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The concept of the Yuan’s LOGO derives from the Chinese character 圆(yuán), which means ‘round’ or ‘a circle,’ a shape the distance from whose center is equal point to any point around it, thus signifying our desire to annihilate distance and bring together AI stakeholders from all around the world at one focal point. 圆 also means ‘come true,’ as in ‘a dream come true.’ In the spirit of both these senses, we are committed to realizing AI potential to transform people’s lives and fulfill the promise it holds to attain game-changing breakthroughs in such areas as e-commerce, sustainable agricultural, pandemic prediction, prevention and control, and amelioration of climate change and environmental degradation, among a myriad of other applications.
We hope you will join hands with us in a circle and help make an AI dream come true for all of us.
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WRITING NEWS FOR BUSINESS AND INVESTMENT CIRCLES
Be clear and to the point and report timely news, since our readers want to know the current state of play, future possibilities. Write news they can use - they want quality information they can act on.
Thus, using everyday Standard American English spelling and usage, write from the heart, but do not detach your head in the process. Shoot from the hip but aim well. Do not write ‘I,’ unless you actually feature as a character in your narrative. Do not begin a sentence/clause with ‘It,’ as in ‘It is raining.’ Say rather, ‘Rain is falling.’ Likewise avoid ‘there is/are’ constructions such as ‘There is a growing body of evidence that shows…’ That should be: ‘A growing body of evidence shows...’ Find the actual subject and put it first. Do not begin a sentence with ‘In fact…’ If you have actual facts, adduce them, and let your audience decide whether they withstand scrutiny or not. At The Yuan, we do not use the royal/conspiratorial ‘we,’ except in a quote (see ‘I,’ above). Rather, gently persuade your readers they have a community of interest with you, or that your views coincide with their own. Avoid use of rhetorical questions. If you do pose one, answer it in the manner of Socrates or Martin Luther King, Jr. Refrain from tautology and philippics, polemics, tirades, diatribes, and rants. Your pet peeves are not everyone’s. Let facts presented in a plain tale spark outrage, not your thundering, flowery oratory. Define esoteric terms/acronyms, etc., since not everyone knows what ‘epigenetics’ are, and some might think a‘PET scan’a device in a veterinarian’s office. Do not ever use ‘etc.’ Be circumspect when referring to Chinese territory(-ies) or politics, whatever your personal views. The Yuan is based in Hong Kong and is active throughout the Chinese mainland and is therefore bound by local laws. Ask us if you have any questions. Oh, and don’t let your paragraphs ramble on to an inordinate length (or sentences, for that matter), or tack on sudden afterthoughts or go off on abrupt tangents.
Accurate 100 percent error-free: if it is not true, it is not news. Correct mistakes.
Objective news is rarely black and white; use outside voices to say what you cannot.
Fair balance protects a story from charges - sometimes legal - of bias
Brief follow the ‘keep it simple’ principle - get to the point, be clear, be jargon-free.
Show, do not tell. Let facts, anecdotes tell the story.
Names make news corporate and personal; the bigger the name, the more newsworthy it is.
News you can use is relevant, informative.
Follow the money: Who, what, why, when, how much?
Use nouns and verbs, not adjectives and adverbs.
Active, not passive: people cause events, they do not happen by themselves, unless they are natural phenomena, but even these have causative agents.
To be sure, include contrary point/s of view to reinforces fairness.
If in doubt, cut it out: do not run a story, or part of a story, that you are unsure about or which makes little or no sense.
Good news judgment is essential to any successful news service. News judgment involves knowing what is news, what is important news, what information should be included in a story as well as where in the story. News judgment also involves verifying information to make sure it is completely accurate (true and correct).
Here are a few tips and fundamentals that are often missing from news and feature stories that will help reporters when interviewing and writing.
The five W’s: Who, where, why, what, and when – and how?
In a news story you should be able to establish the five ‘Ws’ in the first two paragraphs/sentences: WHAT happened; WHO (person/people) the story is about; WHERE did it take place; WHY (reason) did it happen and WHEN (what time/day/month) did it happen. You should be able to write an intro in no more than 35 words, 25 is average.
While there is no right or wrong way to write a feature - a synopsis of the story should be established within the first three or four paragraphs otherwise you will lose the reader. You can begin with a quote from an interview to start a story, and some of the best features generally do that, use a group of three points (for example: this, that and the other) or use a creative or flowery opening, which is not used in a hard news story.
We need to remember that an average reader’s attention span is limited.
Headline, picture, and intro are the first three things a reader will look at. If they are all snappy and eye-catching the reader will skim through the next three or four parts before deciding on whether to finish reading the piece or moving on to something more interesting or appealing to read.
A news story intro is different from a feature and should be summed up in 25 to 35 words. Good news stories are structured using an inverted pyramid that prioritizes information. The most important information is at the beginning. Subsequent information decreases in importance.
The headline is our first contact point with our readers. To grab their attention, a headline should be interesting.
These elements produce the best headlines:
1. Names - names make news and should start headlines
2. Surprise - the first four words should hook readers
3. What is at stake? - headlines should help the reader understand why the news is worthy
4. Drama and tension - headlines should be written around actions and results/consequences
Use short and simple words as much as possible. For example, ‘Set Up’ rather than ‘Established.’
Use up to about 15 words.
Use US$ figures, not CNY numbers, unless CNY numbers are necessary to the story such as when reporting on China’s total debt.
Use a verb. For example:
Alibaba delivers on revenue but feels China slowdown (Reuters)
Alibaba revenues beat expectations despite China slowdown (Financial Times)
Alibaba’s strong earnings are seen as good news for China’s economy (New York Times)
Alibaba shares fall as sales slow, adding to China concern (Bloomberg)
Alibaba eyes global retail expansion as quarterly results shine (South China Morning Post)
Alibaba is expected to take on and beat Amazon
Use present tense unless a past time is specifically referenced. For example:
JD.Com’s crowdfunding trumped rivals Taobao, Suning in January
JD.Com’s crowdfunding trumps rivals Taobao and Suning
Variations of the verb ‘to be,’ ‘is’ and ‘are.’
Do not use semicolons when the same subject takes two verbs. For example:
Lenovo to close three plants, fire 3000 employees
Do not use a semicolon even in the presence of a second subject, asyndeton (e.g., and, but, or, for). For example:
Lenovo to close three plants; employees vow to strike
Do notuse the passive voice in a headline, except in a quote, e.g.,
Driverless technologies can be put into trial use in Xiong’an New Area, says state
On a more general note, do not tell the entire story in a headline, since this obviates the need to read the rest. A headline should pique the reader’s interest, not sate it.
The first paragraph is also known as the theme paragraph because it identifies the theme of the story.
First paragraphs should do two things:
1) Summarize the story.
2) Engage readers.
Summarize the story.
Make it interesting.
Use one sentence, or two at the most and about 35 words or fewer.
Use strong verbs.
Use active voice.
Avoid ‘buried’ leads. We want the ‘new’ news first.
Consider what the story is about
Why would anyone want to read the story? Why did we write it? What’s at stake? Who is winning/losing, making money/losing money? How is the story affecting readers?
Tell the story in three words
Boil it down to a three-word sentence with a universal theme using a noun, an active verb and an object. According to Bill Luening of the Kansas City Star, the story of the Pied Piper would then be: Rats Overrun City. City Hires Ratman. Ratman Kills Rats. City Stiffs Ratman. Ratman Steals Children. Moral: Keep Your Word.
Tell someone about the story
Talking about a story elucidates it. Bruce DeSilva of the Associated Press suggests the bus stop test: “Suppose you are at a bus stop, and someone leans out a bus window and shouts, ‘What is that story you are working on?’ The bus begins to pull away. What are you going to shout?”
Identify the emotion/tension
Where is the emotion/tension? Is it a story about a failure/loss or a success/win? What will touch the reader?
Find the surprise or underlying meaning
What is the surprise? Tease out a bigger picture. Use phrases such as: this means, shows, underscores, illustrates, reflects, suggests, highlights, etc.
Discover the plot
Is this about a character, such as a fallen CEO, an element, such as a faltering market, a setting, such as a troubled company? Who wins/loses? Focus on the heroes, villains, and victims.
Write about ideas
Context paragraphs are not about facts as much as ideas. Try to tell the story without numbers. Rely on images, broader themes instead.For example:
Expectation: The departures are the clearest sign yet that ING’s retreat from investment banking may be broader and faster than first indicated.
Strategy: Converting to an internet bank will allow the company to offer a wider range of products without the cost of maintaining office space, boosting profit.
Regional: The share sale opens the way for a three-company merger of the biggest steelmakers in Korea, China and Japan.
Forward Spin: The rate cut suggests 10-year bond yields may stay at current levels of around 1.70 percent the rest of the year.
Make sure that you do the following before filing a story:
1) Read through the translated article
2) Understand the meaning of the article and, if necessary, recast the headline and first paragraph to reflect what an overseas audience would regard as being the news
3) Research any necessary information and background for the story and add context
4) Rewrite the article using these style guidelines and English-speaking logic (inverted pyramid)
5) Written a catchy headline and first paragraph
6) Proofread the article once or twice for clarity, grammar, punctuation, word choice, spaces between sentences (one), correct dateline and formatting etc.
7) Checked spelling using a spell checker set to US English.
Quick style tips
Order of presentation: WHO, WHAT, WHEN, WHERE (WHY)?
Use Standard US English.
Quote/paraphrase followed by speaker, e.g. “The time has come to go,” Lou Schmoo said, not Lou Schmoo said, “The time has come to go.”
Headlines (with rare exceptions) in present tense.
Four-paragraph lead when length allows (short lead sentence paragraph, with even shorter second sentence, longer third/fourth paragraphs.
Brevity is key. Use short, pithy Anglo-Saxon words (give, get, make, etc.), to avoid entangling the peruser in circumlocution and circumbendibus (using too many words).
Use active voice whenever the actor (subject) is identifiable, except when otherwise justified.
Use US, not UK English. That applies not only to spelling, but also to words, expressions, and phrases, i.e., usage in general.
Use date in full, e.g., January 1, 2021.
Always tell readers the source of our information where possible. Who or what told us? If you do not know, find out.
Where is the action taking place? For example:
The Beijing-based Internet company said…
Alibaba is headquartered in Hangzhou, in China’s southeastern Zhejiang Province.
“We deeply regret the job losses,” President XYZ said, at a press conference in Shanghai.
Shares gained the most in two weeks on the Shanghai stock exchange.
SIZE + SCOPE
This makes a company, person, or event extraordinary. It gives perspective. Choose a size and scope appropriate to the theme of the story to give meaningful perspective and add tension to the lead. Sometimes look beyond size or ranking.
Didi Kuadi, formed in 2015 through the merger of rival taxi-hailing apps controlled by Alibaba and Tencent…
Didi Kuadi, the Chinese taxi-hailing service valued at USD16.5 billion…
Didi Kuadi, Uber’s Chinese rival…
Didi Kuadi, China’s market-leading taxi-hailing app…
First quote should ratify the theme of the story.
The best quotes are opinions, analyses, or interpretations.
Other quotes in a story can provide contrary viewpoint(s).
Remove throat-clearing phrases.
Structure quotes as: “xxxx,” xxxx said, size + scope. “xxxx.”
Quotation marks always appear outside punctuation. For example: “xxxxx,” XYZ said.
Use single quotation marks for quotes within quotes. For example: “He told me, ‘The project is abandoned,’” XYZ said.
Use single quotations for quoted text in headlines.
Whole numbers below 10. For example: three weeks.
Avoid starting a sentence with a number. Use the word to start a sentence otherwise, e.g.: Twenty-eight delegates attended the conference.
With large numbers, use a hyphen to connect word ending in y to another word. For example: Twenty-one thousand. But use a numeral in tandem with percent, e.g., 6 percent.
For numbers 10 and above.
For all money amounts, ages, and percentages. For example: US$5 million, 62 years, 14.5 percent.
Spell out million, billion and trillion after numbers.Do not use m/b/t, mn/bn/tn, or mln/bln/tln in either a headline or body.
When writing about events use months and dates. For example: xxxxx, said at a conference on April 16 last year.
Jan. 13, 2017
Feb. 14, 2020
March 3, 1999
April 1, 2021
May 29, 2018
June 11, 2003
July 4, 1776
Aug. 9, 2011
Sept. 11, 2001
Oct. 31, 1993
Nov. 5, 1605
Dec. 12, 1933
Use a colon in times. For example: 6:30pm. Use the 12-hour, not the 24-hour clock.
When writing times, use am or pm after the number. Do not use time references such as this evening, or this morning, especially with am and pm.
Use noon and midnight. Use ‘today,’ ‘yesterday,’ ‘tomorrow,’ ‘this year,’ ‘next year,’ ‘last year,’ rather than dates.
Write, e.g., ’12pm on March 31’ as ‘midnight on March 31.’
Chinese names should be written as family name first followed by personal name. For example: Zhou Xin (Zhou is the family name.)
Korean names should be written as family name first followed by personal name. For example: Kim Jong Un (Kim is the family name)
Japanese names should be written as personal name first followed by family name. For example: Shinzo Abe (Abe is the family name)
Alibaba in headlines unless more is needed to distinguish between names.
Alibaba Group Holding Ltd. on first reference; Alibaba thereafter.
Do not use multiple designations such as XYZ Co. Ltd., just XYZ Co. Banks tend to be Ltd., but not always. Securities companies (brokerages) tend to be Co.
Do not use Mr or Ms You may sometimes wish to use Dr or Prof when it is pertinent to the story.
Use formal titles such as Chief Executive Officer, President, Chairman, etc.
Capitalize the first letter when a formal title appears before a name, for example - Chief Executive Officer Zhou Jianguo/ Zhou Jianguo, chief executive of…Do not use CEO, except in headlines.
Do not capitalize the first letter when a formal title appears after the name, for example - Zhu Liping, director of XYZ Corp.
Chinese personal names are always two separate words, both capitalized, e.g.,Wang Jianguo, Ouyang Yang’ou, except where the person named uses a different form, e.g., Li Ka-Shing, Jack Ma, Pony Ma.
Place names are always one word, e.g., Qiqihar, Shijiazhuang, Shishi, Urumqi, with the sole exception of Hong Kong. When part of a larger compound like Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, Oroqen Autonomous Banner, etc. obviously these are separate. Write澳门 as Macau.
Use apostrophes where necessary to indicate syllable division, e.g. Chang’an, Xi’an, etc. to distinguish them from Chan’gan, Xian, but only when the possibility of confusion exists.
affect (verb) and effect (noun);
stationary (stopped) and stationery (writing paper);
counsel (adviser/advisor) and council (authority; assembly);
complement (go with) and compliment (flatter);
Lie (be in a recumbent position, tell falsehoods) and lay (set, place, deposit eggs; past tense of ‘lie’);
cite (refer to as a source, authority) and site (n. location, scene; v. to locate, situate).
Use the percentage sign (%) in headlines for brevity, but with no space between the number and percentage sign, e.g. 19%. Spell out the word percent in the body of the story (don’t use the % symbol), e.g., 35 percent.
Use percentages to show increases of decreases. Just stating the amount by which an object rose or fell does not conduce an understanding of the scale of an increase or decrease. Put the percentage increase in the headline and the first paragraph.
Round up, unless a story demands a greater level of detail, i.e., with market/forex reports. Otherwise, numbers become too long for no extra value. Thus, for example: 67.98 becomes 68, while 15.13 becomes 15. Use percentages to indicate a rise or fall in something before the figure/amount. For example: Sales fell 6 percent to USD350 million.
A percentage point is the unit for the arithmetical difference between two percentages. Percentage points are not the same as percentages. For example, if an interest rate is raised to 10 percent from 9 percent, the rate is increased by 1 percentage point, NOT by 1 percent.
Avoid the use of jargon whenever possible. If it is necessary to use jargon, e.g., because a quote contains it, always explain it.
Use toward (not towards), and forward, backward, upward, and downward - all without a terminal ‘s.’
Do not use contractions (isn’t, aren’t, hasn’t, won’t, couldn’t, shouldn’t, etc.),except within quotation marks.
Hyphenate compound modifiers for clarity: high-technology product, high-yield investment, used-car dealership, second-largest maker, iPhone-making factory, etc.
Healthcare, as one word, is both a noun and an adjective.
Crowdfunding - also crowdsourcing -- is the practice of raising money from many people through online platforms to fund businesses and schemes.
Use the currency symbols, etc., in headlines and in the body of the story.
Give a dollar conversion figure for the first currency amount that is not in US dollars, e.g.:
The company raised 1 billion yuan or CNY1 billion in Round-B financing.
The company raised US$150 million or USD150 million (CNY1 billion) in Round-B financing.
Use currency symbols before numbers with no space between the symbol and the number. If there is no money figure, use yuan, dollar, pound, euro, etc.
Going forward, robots are likely to be rolled out at different types of venues including residential, commercial and office buildings, such as those developed by China Vanke Co.
In future/Henceforth/will (after the subject), robots are likely to be rolled out at different types of venues including residential, commercial and office buildings, such as those developed by China Vanke Co.
Going forward, robots are likely to be rolled out at different types of venues including residential, commercial and office buildings, such as those developed by China Vanke Co.
Robots are likely to roll out at different types of venues including residential, commercial and office buildings, such as those developed by China Vanke Co.
WORDS ARE PICTURES
China-South Korea relations have taken a big hit from the impact of the THAAD (Terminal High Altitude Area Defense) anti-ballistic missile - This sentence, which would seem to imply that South Korea has attacked China, refers in fact to a planned deployment of a defensive missile system, not the actual firing of an offensive one.
‘The municipal government has recently launched new designated shared-bicycle parking areas with space for more than 1,000 bicycles in its downtown area.’
The passive voice must never be used, except when:
1. There is no subject
Applications for clinical research of the drug will be made to relevant Chinese and US agencies in the first half of next year.
Wessner had been considering leaving Faraday Future but was afterwards promoted to senior vice president from vice president.
2. Use of active voice will confusingly separate the subject from the predicate or modifier:
The Z717 is the first twinjet airliner the company independently developed, which is based in China’s southwestern Sichuan Province.
The Z717 is the first twinjet airliner independently developed by the company, which is based in China’s southwestern Sichuan Province.
Suning held a press conference for the November 11 Singles’ Day shopping festival yesterday, at which the smart retail robot ECOVACS produced appeared, talked with Suning’s President Hou Enlong and answered his questions.
Of the 17 positions offered by China Xiong Construction Investment Group Co., an affiliate of the Hebei province government, infrastructure construction, financing and public relations management positions attracted the largest numbers of applications.
It is estimated that some 710 million Chinese people traveled for leisure during the holiday and generated about US$89.394 billion (590 billion yuan) in revenue for the national tourism industry.
Estimates hold that some 710 million Chinese people traveled for leisure during the holiday and generated about US$89.394 billion (590 billion yuan) in revenue for the national tourism industry.
It is estimated that the apartment renting credit profile of renters, owners and practitioners will be created on the credit-based apartment renting platform of Alipay by the end of this year.
Alipay will have created the apartment renting credit profile of renters, owners, and practitioners by the end of this year, it projects.
Tianjin Beijing-Tianjin Expressway Co. was founded in 2004 to take charge of the construction and management of the Beijing-Tianjin Expressway, the second freeway connecting the two municipalities and first two-way eight-lane highway built in the capital.
Tianjin Beijing-Tianjin Expressway Co. formed in 2004 to take charge of the construction and management of the Beijing-Tianjin Expressway, the second freeway connecting the two municipalities and first two-way eight-lane highway built in the capital.
China’s second Space Solar Power Station Development Technology Seminar was held in Beijing on October 28.
China’s second Space Solar Power Station Development Technology Seminar convened in Beijing on October 28.
Another good way to avoid resort to the passive voice is to simply remove the passive verb particle (where possible) to make the statement active.
More than 45 duty-free stores have been settled in the China-Kazakhstan Horgos Frontier International Cooperation Center, The Yuan learned from the Horgos Municipal government.
More than 45 duty-free stores have settled in the China-Kazakhstan Horgos Frontier International Cooperation Center, The Yuan learned from the Horgos Municipal government.
No single THAAD missile has ever been launched in anger.
No single THAAD missile has ever launched in anger.
PUTTING THE CART BEFORE THE HORSE
Due to and because of
The word pairs ‘because of’ and ‘due to’ are not interchangeable. The reason they are not, is that they ‘grew up’ differently in the language.
‘Because of’ grew up as an adverb; ‘due to’ grew up as an adjective. Remember that adjectives modify only nouns or pronouns, whereas adverbs usually modify verbs. (The fact that adverbs occasionally modify other adverbs or even adjectives and entire phrases is not relevant to this discussion.)
To be more precise, with their attendant words, ‘due to’ and ‘because of’ operate as adjectival and adverbial prepositional phrases. To understand how the functions of ‘due to’ and ‘because of’ vary, look at these sentences.
1. His defeat was due to the lottery issue.
2. He was defeated because of the lottery issue.
In sentence #1, his is a possessive pronoun that modifies the noun defeat. The verb ‘was’ is a linking verb. So, to create a sentence, we need a subject complement after the verb ‘was.’ The adjectival prepositional phrase ‘due to the lottery issue’ is that complement, linked to the subject by ‘was.’ Thus, it modifies the noun defeat.
But in sentence #2, the pronoun ‘he’ has become the sentence's subject. The verb is now ‘was defeated.’ As reconstructed, ‘He was defeated’ could in fact be a complete sentence. And ‘due to’ has nothing to modify. It's an adjective, remember? It can't very well modify the pronoun ‘he,’ can it?
Neither can it refer to ‘was defeated’ because adjectives don't modify verbs. Sentence 2, therefore, should read: ‘He was defeated because of the lottery issue.’ Now the ‘why’ of the verb ‘was defeated’ is explained, properly, by an adverbial prepositional phrase, ‘because of.’
In informal speech, we probably can get by with such improper usage as, “His defeat was because of the lottery issue,” and “He was defeated due to the lottery issue.” But we shouldn't accept that kind of sloppiness in writing. We don't want to look stupid among those in the audience who know better. If we show them we don't care about the language, how can we expect them to believe us when we tell them that we care about the facts?
PLEASE PERMIT ME TO INTRODUCE…
Avoid gratuitous introductory clauses.
In recent years, with the emergence of new technologies such as the Internet, Big Data, and artificial intelligence (AI), companies face ever more computing-intensive scenarios and have growing demand for HPC.
The recent emergence of new technologies such as the Internet, Big Data, and artificial intelligence (AI) confronts companies with ever more computing-intensive scenarios and stokes demand for HPC.
There has been a structural shift away from traditional tourist spots, which only account for 20 percent of total revenue.
The structure is shifting away from traditional tourist spots, which now make up only 20 percent of total revenue.
There are still many unreasonable and inefficient elements in China’s economic structure.
Many unreasonable and inefficient elements remain in China’s economic structure.
There are many compelling reasons to restore the Holy Herb.
Many reasons compel restoration of the Holy Herb.
“There are more than 45 duty-free stores that have now been set up in the center with daily average passenger traffic of 20,000 and a daily average purchasing amount of 5 million yuan, making it the largest duty-free shopping zone in Western China,” Xu said.
“More than 45 duty-free stores have now set up in the center with daily average passenger traffic of 20,000 and a daily average purchasing amount of 5 million yuan, making it the largest duty-free shopping zone in Western China,” Xu said.
Aggravating Aggregating Verbs
Huishoubao.com makes an initial evaluation of an online order, then negotiates the price with the owner.
Huishoubao.com initially evaluates an online order, then negotiates the price with the owner.
The conduct of these actors will have a positive or negative impact on their credit ratings.
The conduct of these actors will positively or negatively impact their credit ratings.
STOCK SYMBOLS (TICKERS)
Provide the stock ticker symbol of all listed companies after the first use of the company name. For example: Alibaba Holdings Ltd. [NYSE:BABA]
Write the stock ticker in square brackets [ ] with a colon (:) between the exchange symbol and the stock symbol, but with no space following. For example:
Tencent Holdings Ltd. [HK:0770]
Ncondezi Energy Ltd. [LON:NCCL]
Alibaba Group Holding Ltd. [NYSE:BABA]
Jiangsu Hengrui Medicine Co. [SHA:600276]
Huaxun Fangzhou Co. [SHE:000687]
(Note the struck-out text in the examples above: Do not write ‘Co. Ltd.,’ just ‘Co.’)
Use http:/www.google.com/finance to find stock tickers. When a company is listed on two (or more) exchanges, use both (all) separated by a semi-colon and a space.
The two companies both face fierce challenges from CRRC Corp. [SHA:601766; HK:1766], The Paper.cn reported yesterday.
Do not use an apostrophe between a company’s name and its stock ticker:
Chinese real estate giant China Vanke Co.’s [SHE: 000002] largest shareholder Shenzhen Metro Group Co., saw changes in the leadership. The former chairman Lin Maode was replaced by Xin Jie, Shenzhen Tagen Group Co.’s [SHE:000090] chairman.
Shenzhen Metro Group Co., the largest shareholder in Chinese real estate giant China Vanke Co. [SHE: 000002], has shaken up its leadership. Xin Jie, chairman of Shenzhen Tagen Group Co.[SHE:000090], has replaced outgoing chairman Lin Maode.
The Apple dealer based in China’s southeastern Jiangsu province activated an iPhone 8 Plus before September 22, Apple Inc.’s [NASDAQ:AAPL] official global release date of iPhone 8 and iPhone 8 Plus.
The Apple dealer based in China’s southeastern Jiangsu province activated an iPhone 8 Plus before September 22, the official global release date of the iPhone 8 and iPhone 8 Plus set by Apple Inc. [NASDAQ:AAPL].
iQiyi’s main competitors include Alibaba Group Holding Ltd.’s [NYSE:BABA] youku.com and Tencent Holdings Ltd.’s [HK:0700] v.qq.com, both of which have enough funds to compete in contents. iQiyi needs to buy and create more content to sustain its lead among video websites.
iQiyi’s main competitors include youku.com, owned by Alibaba Group Holding Ltd. [NYSE:BABA], and v.qq.com under Tencent Holdings Ltd. [HK:0700], both of which have enough funds to compete in content. iQiyi needs to buy and create more content to hold its lead among video websites.
If you define a company’s name as an abbreviated or shortened term or acronym in round brackets, place the stock symbol before the defined term, e.g., Carnival Group International Holdings Ltd. [HK:0996] (Carnival Group).
Use PBOC for People’s Bank of China (not PBoC) in headlines and body. The same rule applies to all acronyms, which must appear in full in the first iteration, followed defined as a term in round brackets. Thus, “China’s central bank, the People’s Bank of China (PBOC), yesterday set the yuan-dollar central parity rate at…”
America's Health Insurance Plans replied to the National Association of Attorney General that they are exploring and strengthening use of non-medication therapies which have been proved in pain relief, Cathryn Donaldson, the insurers’ association’s director of communications, said September 26.
America's Health Insurance Plans replied to the National Association of Attorney General that they are exploring and strengthening use of non-medication therapies which have been proved in pain relief, Cathryn Donaldson, director of communications of the insurers’ association, said September 26.
APOSTROPHIZING CHINESE NAMES
Xi’an, Chang’an and wherever else appropriate to avoid confusion.
LIST OF COMMONLY-USED ACRONYMS
SASAC State-Owned Assets Supervision and Administration Commission under the State Council
English adjectives follow the order of opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose and noun. For example, a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife. (From Mark Forsyth’s The Elements of Eloquence.)
Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region
Macau Special Administrative Region
The (Kingdom of) the Netherlands, Holland
The United Kingdom first, then UK.
The United States first, then US, not America
The Hangzhou Court of the Internet
Beijing Haidian District People’s Court
Beijing No. 1 Intermediate People’s Court
The Supreme People’s Court
The State Administration for Industry and Commerce (SAIC)
The People’s Bank of China (PBOC)
The National Development and Reform Commission (NDRC)
China Securities Regulatory Commission (CSRC)
China Insurance Regulatory Commission (CIRC)
The State-Owned Asset Supervision and Administration Commission (SASAC)
Public Security Bureau (PBS)
STOCK EXCHANGES (15 Largest by Volume + NEEQ)
Denmark, Finland, Sweden
National Equities Exchange and
Note: See Appendix A for a complete list of world exchanges and their abbreviations.
ONOMATAPOEIA or ADD SNAP, CRACKLE AND POP
Onomatopoeia refers to ‘imitative’ words that sound like that which they describe. Examples are splash, crunch, smack, whack, whoosh, and myriad others. Use them to simplify, vivify and spice up your expression.
While as entertaining as malapropisms, mixed-metaphors do little to establish the writer’s credibility in the reader’s eyes. George Orwell adduces the example of ‘the fascist octopus has sung its swan song,’ to illustrate the self-canceling effect of such constructions in his Politics and the English Language (Appendix).
Example: Offshore wind power is expected to embrace exploding development.
VERBOSE VERBAL CLAUSES
Most of the 112 Lotte Mart stores in the country are now non-operational. However, Chinese law requires the firm to continue to pay workers 70 to 80 percent of their salaries despite the stores being closed.
Most of the 112 Lotte Mart stores in the country are now non-operational. However, Chinese law requires the firm to continue to pay workers 70 to 80 percent of their salaries despite the stores’ closure.
September 28 - China has introduced new measures to help solve the old problem that financing remains difficult and funding costs are still elevated for smaller, less profitable enterprises (smaller enterprises).
September 28 - China has introduced new measures to help solve the old problem of difficult financing and exorbitant funding costs for smaller, less profitable enterprises (smaller enterprises).
Prices can be calculated based on mobile phone model, use, global market price, version type and other factors.
Price calculations rest on mobile phone model, use, global market price, version type and other factors.
Nanjing, Xiamen, Fuzhou and other second-tier cities also posted significant sales losses over the same period last year, and housing sales flattened in third and fourth tier cities, indicating that the Chinese real estate market has become increasingly segmented.
Nanjing, Xiamen, Fuzhou and other second-tier cities also posted significant sales losses over the same period last year, and housing sales flattened in third and fourth tier cities, indicating the increasing segmentation of the Chinese real estate market.
After being compressed and packaged, various renewable resources are sent to the professional processing plant.
After compression and packaging, various renewable resources go to the professional processing plant.
CIRCUMVENT THE CIRCUMBENDIBUS -or- STOP BEATING AROUND THE BUSH
The latter is mainly engaged in the operation of rail transit construction.
The latter mainly builds rail transit projects.
These new measures will aid in further promoting stabilization of the yuan-dollar exchange rate.
These new measures will further stabilize the yuan-dollar exchange rate.
The company will also provide support to China Nuclear E&C Group in overseas market development, business advisory, risk management and project finance.
The company will also support China Nuclear E&C Group in overseas market development, business advisory, risk management and project finance.
China only ranks six among the top 10 most cash-free countries on a list market research agency Forex Bonuses prepared, because cash payment is still prevalent in the country.
China only ranks six among the top 10 most cash-free countries on a list market research agency Forex Bonuses prepared, because cash payment still prevails in the country.
China's memory products have always been dependent on imports.
China's memory products have always depended on imports.
The share sale will have a positive impact on the listed company’s earnings and will help rationalize asset allocation and improve cash flow, per the statement.
The share sale will positively impact the listed company’s earnings and will help rationalize asset allocation and improve cash flow, per the statement.
The train’s maximum passenger capacity is 1,302 and the maximum operating speed is 100 km/h. Its cost is 33 percent less than the subway. 137 words
The train holds up to 1,302 passengers and tops out at 100 km/h. It costs 33 percent less than the subway. 127 words
The policy address states that the government will endeavor to drive scientific and technical innovation in an all-round way in order to inject new vitality into the economy and improve the life of the citizens.
The government will strive to drive comprehensive scientific and technical innovation to revitalize the economy and improve citizens’ lives, the policy address states.
The total DRAM market share of the three major firms takes up 94 percent of the global market.
The three major firms share 94 percent of the global DRAM market.
Donors Born in the 80s, 90s Make Majority of China’s Rising Online Charitable Contributions
Those Born in the ‘80s, ‘90s Contribute Most to China’s Rising Online Charity
Construction waste refers to spoils, wasted materials and other wastes generated during construction.
‘Waste’ refers to scraps and other unusable materials generated during construction.
Temporary structures refer to temporary buildings, structures, and facilities for living and production that must be built by the constructor for the purpose of construction.
Temporary structures are one-off buildings and facilities for living and production that must be erected to prepare for actual construction.
The Yuan uses US English, so please write in its standard form. Below are 12 simple style tips for your reference.
1. Headlines are all lower case, except for the first letter and proper nouns. Headlines must be full sentences (subject+verb+object/subject+predicate).
2. Write currencies as $, pounds, euros, yuan, yen, rials, pesos, francs.
3. Do not use ‘…etc.’, ‘including…’ = use ‘such as...’
4. In order to/in terms of = to/in
5. We/you/I = banned; use I/we if you feature in your story, otherwise not. Use ‘one’ as a generic pronoun in preference to ‘you.’
6. Acronyms are written out in full at the first iteration, thereafter in shortened form, e.g., ‘…according to the Food and Drug Administration. …the FDA said. ’ Explain all technical terms the average reader might be unfamiliar with.
7. References are to endnotes, not footnotes, using the Chicago Manual of Style. Their numbers appear after the object to which they refer and its punctuation, if any, with no space, e.g.:
‘…clients who are operating on their business platforms.
‘…clients who are operating on their business platforms.1
8. Avoid introductory clauses = put them at the middle/end without a comma, thus:
‘In recent years, the growth of AI has spawned a host of industries servile to it.’ becomes:
‘The growth of AI has spawned a host of industries servile to it in recent years.’
9. Use the shortest n-dash (-) with one space on either side. This is preferable to brackets/commas in brief asides.
10. Use ‘e.g.,’ ‘i.e.,’ instead of ‘for example,’ ‘for instance,’ ‘that is to say.’
11. Only use double quotation marks for actual quotes. Use single ones otherwise.
12. Avoid use of passive voice and keep sentences/paragraphs short.
1Bank for International Settlements (2019). “Big tech in finance: opportunities and risks”, BIS Annual Economic Report, Ch. III, June.